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Take a look at myself by *cugot12:iconcugot12:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2009 *cugot12
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Model: Markus
Age: 20
Wetumpka, AL

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My fist attempt to use the clone tool and layers !


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=cutofakiss Apr 7, 2009, 8:34:22 PM
Though this is a great piece and you did a great job with the cloning tool, I think I would prefer to see the images separate. The right image is more relaxed and the left image he is more stiff. The left image seems closer than the right. Though the left image may be looking at the right image, I do not see the right image looking at the left. What is in the left images hand? It is in some way cut out or off. Blend the white spot by his hand in with the black. It looks good though.
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=Pickyme Apr 6, 2009, 7:17:03 PM
What is he holding? I can't tell.

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*cugot12 Apr 6, 2009, 7:18:15 PM
It's a mask ...wish I would have put more light on it now..
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=Pickyme Apr 6, 2009, 7:19:07 PM
Oh Ok.. yeah it is lost in black.. other than that great job!

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*cugot12 Apr 6, 2009, 7:20:14 PM
Thanks hun...I was pleased with it other then the mask blending a bit
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=painting-with-light Apr 6, 2009, 9:04:21 PM
I agree that the mask required better lighting but other than that it looks excellent

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`davincipoppalag Apr 7, 2009, 1:17:19 AM
Really cool piece Randy~

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~Dollface-Photography Apr 7, 2009, 7:07:15 AM
I like :) Though I must say I like the left shot of him wayy better than the right one. It's a damn hot picture of him.
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~BubbleSwallower Apr 7, 2009, 7:19:18 AM
As a photographer you should already know that if you stage something to the far edge of your photo if loses its importants, I suggest that you move the man clone from the right a little to the left. That way everything else will fall in to place. And I don't know if he's holding anything but I can't see it so that makes this a mysterious clue found scene for you photo.

Good luck. =D

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*cugot12 Apr 7, 2009, 7:38:30 AM
That was kinda the purpose of staging it there. He is standing off looking at the other self..The main focus
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